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新东方老师的内部资料,老师的范文特别简单易懂,也很好上手 [复制链接]

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只看楼主 倒序阅读 使用道具 0楼 发表于: 2013-08-26
新东方这篇范文我觉得挺好的,老师写的,挺简单易操作,词汇都不太难,但都挺好的,条理清楚,给大家分享下



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As is vividly depicted in the drawing, in front of a knocked over bottle stand two men, both looking at the bottle but holding completely different states of mind. One of them looks frustrated, thinking that everything is over. However, the other smiles with the optimistic belief that it is fortunate to have some left.
Simple as the picture is, the intended meaning is really thought-provoking. It reveals the plain fact that attitude means everything. Actually, living in a world which is full of imperfection and setbacks, it is one’s attitude that decides whether he is qualified for the success of life, and optimism differentiates those who can excel and overcome the hardship from those who easily yield to the frustrations.
Most obviously, everyone will experience the up and downs in life. If one is able to look at the positive side of things through rose-colored glasses, his heart will always be full of confidence and setbacks are no longer unconquerable. More importantly, confidence is just the source of energy and inner power, which walks you through the hard times of life, tackles the difficulties and motivates you forward on the way to your goals. At a deeper level, the world needs this kind of positive energy, for it is a vital power, which can be spread and influence the people around. In a word, if you are incapable of altering the way how things happen, what you can do is to stay optimistic, because attitude really matters
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只看该作者 1楼 发表于: 2013-08-26
选择适合自己的范文模板,整理出自己熟悉的模板来
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只看该作者 2楼 发表于: 2013-08-26
完全认同小天版主的建议
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只看该作者 3楼 发表于: 2013-08-26
谢谢分享。小二过来看一下
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箫小:谢谢分享。小二过来看一下 (2013-08-26 20:53) 

确实好。总觉得,心里话说不出,积累偏少了。继续努力呀还得。
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箫小:谢谢分享。小二过来看一下 (2013-08-26 20:53) 

确实好。总觉得,心里话说不出,积累偏少了。继续努力呀还得。
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箫小:谢谢分享。小二过来看一下 (2013-08-26 20:53) 

确实好。总觉得,心里有话,说不出来,还得继续努力i呀!谢谢萧小分享哦!
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箫小:谢谢分享。小二过来看一下 (2013-08-26 20:53) 

确实好。总觉得,心里有话,说不出来,还得继续努力i呀!谢谢萧小分享哦!
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小二:确实好。总觉得,心里有话,说不出来,还得继续努力i呀!谢谢萧小分享哦! (2013-08-26 23:07) 

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只看该作者 9楼 发表于: 2013-08-27
范文可以在写作的时候用来练习,但是考试的时候绝对不能直接用模板喔。。一定要注意。。
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